HAIKU TUNATiny expressions of my soul
a deep water poem -- how appropriate, haiku tuna!
Ocean contains so much life unknown to us. Secretive and deep..drumming waterKill Word Verification
I like how your take on live water took a sinister turn...mysterious and scary!
Also enjoyed the darker, more menacing side of water, needed to complete the picture.
an interesting twist to the prompt
funny how one being's adaptive environs completely trashes another being!Hm....Thanks!
the vast ocean is much like space to me.
a deep dark world where sight is superfluous. I want to know more.
Perfect. I've seen blind fish - interesting piece!
yes.... thinking of the sting... floating jellyfish..tho beautiful ouch!
Ocean brine puckers and stings. I love the sensation and rhythm of this line, and can feel the salt crusting on my skin.
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a deep water poem -- how appropriate, haiku tuna!
Ocean contains so much life unknown to us. Secretive and deep..
drumming water
Kill Word Verification
I like how your take on live water took a sinister turn...mysterious and scary!
Also enjoyed the darker, more menacing side of water, needed to complete the picture.
an interesting twist to the prompt
funny how one being's adaptive environs completely trashes another being!
Hm....
Thanks!
the vast ocean is much like space to me.
a deep dark world where sight is superfluous. I want to know more.
Perfect. I've seen blind fish - interesting piece!
yes.... thinking of the sting... floating jellyfish..tho beautiful ouch!
Ocean brine puckers and stings. I love the sensation and rhythm of this line, and can feel the salt crusting on my skin.
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