Live Water

dark murky depths crush
ocean brine puckers and stings
sightless creatures thrive

11 comments:

Sue said...

a deep water poem -- how appropriate, haiku tuna!

gautami tripathy said...

Ocean contains so much life unknown to us. Secretive and deep..

drumming water

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Fledgling Poet said...

I like how your take on live water took a sinister turn...mysterious and scary!

Neverending Story said...

Also enjoyed the darker, more menacing side of water, needed to complete the picture.

qualcosa di bello said...

an interesting twist to the prompt

Beth P. said...

funny how one being's adaptive environs completely trashes another being!

Hm....

Thanks!

floreta said...

the vast ocean is much like space to me.

gabrielle said...

a deep dark world where sight is superfluous. I want to know more.

Tumblewords: said...

Perfect. I've seen blind fish - interesting piece!

one more believer said...

yes.... thinking of the sting... floating jellyfish..tho beautiful ouch!

endurogirl said...

Ocean brine puckers and stings. I love the sensation and rhythm of this line, and can feel the salt crusting on my skin.