HAIKU TUNATiny expressions of my soul
That is a beautiful space in which to live.
Sounds like the best of both!
I like this so much because it turns the expected on its head -- stardust by day, earthbound dreams at night.
a romantic fantasy, beautifully put
I've known 'her'--took care of several hospice patients that were her...thank you for the reminder that this state can be attained--
Divinely done. Beautiful.
Sounds like a great way to live to me.
i wish to be in that placeplaying for pleasing the moonAnd please do visit Poetry Train being run each Monday!
I love the 'upset' of this - the reversal of expected. Well done!
Very cool switch!
Maybe if we just open our minds we too could have stardust fill our days. Wonderful idea. thanks
There is an interesting twist in this haiku. The idea of days being more liberating than the nighttime is an interesting one.
Truly lovely.
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That is a beautiful space in which to live.
Sounds like the best of both!
I like this so much because it turns the expected on its head -- stardust by day, earthbound dreams at night.
a romantic fantasy, beautifully put
I've known 'her'--
took care of several hospice patients that were her...
thank you for the reminder that this state can be attained--
Divinely done. Beautiful.
Sounds like a great way to live to me.
i wish to be in that place
playing for pleasing the moon
And please do visit Poetry Train being run each Monday!
I love the 'upset' of this - the reversal of expected. Well done!
Very cool switch!
Maybe if we just open our minds we too could have stardust fill our days. Wonderful idea. thanks
There is an interesting twist in this haiku. The idea of days being more liberating than the nighttime is an interesting one.
Truly lovely.
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