Stardust

Stardust fills her days
while twilight brings earthbound dreams --
Life lived divinely

13 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

That is a beautiful space in which to live.

Deborah Godin said...

Sounds like the best of both!

Sue said...

I like this so much because it turns the expected on its head -- stardust by day, earthbound dreams at night.

lissa said...

a romantic fantasy, beautifully put

Beth P. said...

I've known 'her'--
took care of several hospice patients that were her...

thank you for the reminder that this state can be attained--

Raven said...

Divinely done. Beautiful.

fourwindshaiga said...

Sounds like a great way to live to me.

gautami tripathy said...

i wish to be in that place

playing for pleasing the moon

And please do visit Poetry Train being run each Monday!

Tumblewords: said...

I love the 'upset' of this - the reversal of expected. Well done!

Linda Jacobs said...

Very cool switch!

mgirl said...

Maybe if we just open our minds we too could have stardust fill our days. Wonderful idea. thanks

Pam said...

There is an interesting twist in this haiku. The idea of days being more liberating than the nighttime is an interesting one.

spacedlaw said...

Truly lovely.