HAIKU TUNATiny expressions of my soul
Yes...and the standing and staring is a wonderful thing to do!
There are always the tracks ones make or the tracks ones do follow.
Yes to standing and staring and the mystery behind the march and the comrade along paths already trodden.
Staring at the trackImagining different livesFootprints in dry mud.
Your words hover beautifully in the mind's eye!
I do so like the line "March by mysterious means"!
Very nice!
I like the pause at the beginning and the action at the end. Nice work!
Interesting take on the a fork in the road.
wonderful alliteration!
My sister doesn't stare long, she has a very simple formula. If we don't know, take the fork on the left, it is less crowded.This is a wonderful little poem, H.T, unless there is a sign (or use a formula) it is generally a big mystery why we go which way...
I like your take here..contemplating-
the mysteryis in asking questionsthat have no answers.
the road more taken?Thanks for this lovely take on the prompt--I liked Paul's words about questions without answers--
Post a Comment
14 comments:
Yes...and the standing and staring is a wonderful thing to do!
There are always the tracks ones make or the tracks ones do follow.
Yes to standing and staring and the mystery behind the march and the comrade along paths already trodden.
Staring at the track
Imagining different lives
Footprints in dry mud.
Your words hover beautifully in the mind's eye!
I do so like the line "March by mysterious means"!
Very nice!
I like the pause at the beginning and the action at the end. Nice work!
Interesting take on the a fork in the road.
wonderful alliteration!
My sister doesn't stare long, she has a very simple formula. If we don't know, take the fork on the left, it is less crowded.
This is a wonderful little poem, H.T, unless there is a sign (or use a formula) it is generally a big mystery why we go which way.
..
I like your take here..contemplating-
the mystery
is in asking questions
that have no answers.
the road more taken?
Thanks for this lovely take on the prompt--
I liked Paul's words about questions without answers--
Post a Comment