HAIKU TUNATiny expressions of my soul
Mysterious.
Ah, the effect of those crunchy leaves!
love the thoughts here, 'Glowing eyes wink out' beautiful!
Delightfully sensory! I'm sure a remember a moment like this, but where? when?
You've got a whole novel here in these three tiny lines.
i like the last line.
Evocative - twilight and day's end...nice!
I love wondering what creature it might be sleeping in the crushed leaves -- a fox? a rabbit? a fawn? Like spacedlaw says "mysterious"!
Warm, inviting! I love the glowing eyes winking out, at the start of their "day", blinking in the waking. A lovely crisp, but gentle poem
Even those that lurk in the darkness of the shrubs sleep. . . very nice.
goodliness chilled - very nice ;)
Love "glowing eyes wink out"- great imagery!
Dang, I forgot my glasses.
morning visitor...the clatters of the shrikebreak the silence
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Mysterious.
Ah, the effect of those crunchy leaves!
love the thoughts here, 'Glowing eyes wink out' beautiful!
Delightfully sensory! I'm sure a remember a moment like this, but where? when?
You've got a whole novel here in these three tiny lines.
i like the last line.
Evocative - twilight and day's end...nice!
I love wondering what creature it might be sleeping in the crushed leaves -- a fox? a rabbit? a fawn? Like spacedlaw says "mysterious"!
Warm, inviting! I love the glowing eyes winking out, at the start of their "day", blinking in the waking. A lovely crisp, but gentle poem
Even those that lurk in the darkness of the shrubs sleep. . . very nice.
goodliness chilled - very nice ;)
Love "glowing eyes wink out"- great imagery!
Dang, I forgot my glasses.
morning visitor...
the clatters of the shrike
break the silence
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