HAIKU TUNATiny expressions of my soul
I cam relate to this..you clutch the vacuum
the nape is such an imaginary place ~ we only see our own in images ~ never directly ~ and your light touch is surely in- genii -ous
ay yi yi!!Yes, that's one of the places I feel them--the other one is the top of my head, like a hand on it, blessing, maybe...Thanks!!!
I feel heat!Great play of words...TJI love haiku.It can be lots of fun...but I see you are really good from the looks of your blog.
"warm breath on my neck"erotic, sensual, there but not there. Lovely
Phew, warm breath or not, this makes me shiver!Love your stuff!
Sexy and haunting.
This was powerful...yes, I've experienced that very feeling. Beautiful words!
I can relate to this one, too.
Spectral, indeed. Lovely imagery.
a whisper. a breath.
takinga handful of dreamsfrom your pocket,you remind me that youthis only an illusion
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I cam relate to this..
you clutch the vacuum
the nape is such an imaginary place ~ we only see our own in images ~ never directly ~ and your light touch is surely in- genii -ous
ay yi yi!!
Yes, that's one of the places I feel them--the other one is the top of my head, like a hand on it, blessing, maybe...
Thanks!!!
I feel heat!
Great play of words...
TJ
I love haiku.It can be lots of fun...but I see you are really good from the looks of your blog.
"warm breath on my neck"
erotic, sensual, there but not there. Lovely
Phew, warm breath or not, this makes me shiver!
Love your stuff!
Sexy and haunting.
This was powerful...yes, I've experienced that very feeling. Beautiful words!
I can relate to this one, too.
Spectral, indeed. Lovely imagery.
a whisper. a breath.
taking
a handful of dreams
from your pocket,
you remind me that youth
is only an illusion
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