HAIKU TUNA: Movement

One step forward, but
three steps back, my heart he glides
a forsaken waltz

floreta said...: i know this dance well..; February 8, 2009 at 4:08 PM
Anonymous said...: I can hear the music...; February 8, 2009 at 4:09 PM
SandyCarlson said...: Such is the nature of progress. I can feel this one.; February 8, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...: ... saving the last dance. Nice.; February 8, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Roswila said...: Sigh, me, too. I know this dance all too well.; February 8, 2009 at 6:43 PM
gautami tripathy said...: Life is such..

movement; February 8, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Beth P. said...: Delicious, forsaken waltz. My feet know this one, and my heart as well!

Thanks, H.T.--; February 8, 2009 at 7:51 PM
Sherri B. said...: Such is the dance...; February 8, 2009 at 10:06 PM
Anonymous said...: cute !!; February 9, 2009 at 7:36 AM
Tumblewords: said...: Oh, yes. The movement of life. Good piece...; February 9, 2009 at 2:15 PM
Kilauea Poetry said...: This certainly does capture a few of my steps..; February 9, 2009 at 2:30 PM
Ofira Sephiroth said...: very nicely written; February 9, 2009 at 5:23 PM
indicaspecies said...: The movement of waltzing!; February 10, 2009 at 3:39 PM
Anonymous said...: lovely; February 11, 2009 at 8:31 PM
TJ said...: I love this!!!
I have dance this waltz many times..many ways.
TJ; February 15, 2009 at 5:56 PM