HAIKU TUNA: El Capitan

Bedrock eternal,
below on dusty vistas,
rattler's baneful hiss

Kilauea Poetry said...: Quite a descriptive verse for this picture..cool-; February 9, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Tumblewords: said...: The third line is so evocative of the area and falls in place nicely!; February 9, 2009 at 4:42 PM
Andy Sewina said...: Lovely picture, somewhat spoiled by the fence in the foreground.

Wonderful choice of words!; February 9, 2009 at 5:47 PM
Julia Phillips Smith said...: I love 'bedrock eternal'.; February 10, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Sherri B. said...: What a crystal clear picture you painted...that last line made me shudder.; February 11, 2009 at 7:02 AM
Anonymous said...: Wow...such a vivid picture. I can feel the heat.; February 11, 2009 at 6:52 PM
Anonymous said...: Says it all; February 11, 2009 at 7:55 PM
gautami tripathy said...: Beautiful picture and verse..

Poetry Train: nature rules; February 12, 2009 at 6:38 AM